I finished my first draft of my zeppelin story last night. I printed it out and when I went down to pick it up off the printer, I found that the fan on the powersuppy of my home server is failing. I shut it down and am leaving it turned off while I'm not using it, until I can get the power supply replaced. I should have done it today because it'll be harder to find stores open tomorrow.

I'm pleased with how the story turned out. I've gotten some comments from several people and a detailed critique from Phil. Tomorrow I plan to go back over it, make a few substantive changes, clean up the language in a dozen places, and add a bit more imagery and detail. Each story I write seems to get better, which is a good feeling.


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